Wow, "dark yews" is a great line!Something so simple, just two words, yet it has more than one layer of meaning.You should consider that as the opening line, it's wonderful!humiditytrailing from clouds aboveto dark yews dark yewsthe humidity trailing from cloud to cloud?
Thanks, Alan. I did specify the yews rather than trees in general because of the association with churchyards - maybe a sad note in summer! I felt the humidity coming down onto me from the sky, maybe like this:dark yewsthe humidity trailingfrom clouds to earth
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