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Tuesday, August 25, 2009

morning break
touch of coolness in the air
filled with birdsong

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I like this!

morning break
touch of coolness in the air
filled with birdsong


I do wonder if you could make it more immediate maybe?

morning break
a touch of coolness in the air
fills with birdsong


or

morning break
the coolness in the air
fills with birdsong


all my best,
Alan
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