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brave postman
snarling dog

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Hi Rachel!

I like the idea, but the haiku has a bit too much "tontoism" at present:

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brave postman
snarling dog


e.g.

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a postman braves
the snarling dog


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a postman passes
the snarling dog


all my best,
Alan
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martin said...

e.g.

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a postman snarls
at the dog

Leatherdykeuk said...

Thank you Alan - very helpful.

Martin - Wonderful!

Alan Summers said...

Scary postman! ;-)