Hi Rachel!I like the idea, but the haiku has a bit too much "tontoism" at present:open windowbrave postmansnarling dog e.g.open windowa postman bravesthe snarling dogopen windowa postman passesthe snarling dogall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
e.g.open windowa postman snarlsat the dog
Thank you Alan - very helpful.Martin - Wonderful!
Scary postman! ;-)
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Hi Rachel!
I like the idea, but the haiku has a bit too much "tontoism" at present:
open window
brave postman
snarling dog
e.g.
open window
a postman braves
the snarling dog
open window
a postman passes
the snarling dog
all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition Results
.
e.g.
open window
a postman snarls
at the dog
Thank you Alan - very helpful.
Martin - Wonderful!
Scary postman! ;-)
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