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Monday, August 10, 2009

summer drizzle--
a flock flutter through
the rainbow

5 comments:

John McDonald said...

delightful
john

diana l. said...

Here, here!

martin said...
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martin said...

I enjoyed this but I suggest the following:


summer drizzle--
a flock flutter through
the rainbow


1. A flock (singular) > flutter(s)
2. A flock of (naming things is important “swallows”, “geese”) flutters
3. Flutter is a light flapping of wings or rapid flapping of something small. Apply the appropriate behavior to a species or thing. For example,

summer drizzle
a flock of snow geese migrates
across the rainbow

???

Wandering spirit said...

Thx, Martin. I'll keep it in mind.