I enjoyed this but I suggest the following:summer drizzle--a flock flutter throughthe rainbow1. A flock (singular) > flutter(s)2. A flock of (naming things is important “swallows”, “geese”) flutters3. Flutter is a light flapping of wings or rapid flapping of something small. Apply the appropriate behavior to a species or thing. For example,summer drizzlea flock of snow geese migratesacross the rainbow???
Thx, Martin. I'll keep it in mind.
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