good one alanjohn
It was yummy chocolate made by my wife. Much better, and cheaper than shop bought, which is often a few months old from a factory. ;-)
family visitthe gleam of the late lighton homemade chocolatetosurprise family visitthe late afternoon gleamon homemade chocolate.
Happiness was in the air. I can feel it, Alan.
Thanks for the comments, and yes I did have a nice time, but didn't want to limit the proto-haiku to be just that.I'm still not happy with this poem and it isn't a haiku yet, but glad I had a couple of goes at it.Sometimes these things work, sometimes not. It won't be going into any magazine though. ;-)Alan
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