the sound of nails
on fencewood - a squirrel pours
into the garden
love - 'pours' well chosen wordjohn
I agree, and this haiku is excellent!I rarely see a good haiku when it has a squirrel as part of its subject matter.Jem has done one of the best haiku I've seen for a long time. I just cannot do a decent haiku with squirrels even though I spent a whole winter with the darned animals. ;-)And Jem, this is the first time in ages I've seen a good and natural 5/7/5 haiku.There's nothing strained in the syntax, and the mid middle line hyphen works fine.Impressive!all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
lovely image from 'pours' :)
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