I rarely see a good haiku when it has a squirrel as part of its subject matter.
Jem has done one of the best haiku I've seen for a long time. I just cannot do a decent haiku with squirrels even though I spent a whole winter with the darned animals. ;-)
And Jem, this is the first time in ages I've seen a good and natural 5/7/5 haiku.
There's nothing strained in the syntax, and the mid middle line hyphen works fine.
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love - 'pours' well chosen word
john
I agree, and this haiku is excellent!
I rarely see a good haiku when it has a squirrel as part of its subject matter.
Jem has done one of the best haiku I've seen for a long time. I just cannot do a decent haiku with squirrels even though I spent a whole winter with the darned animals. ;-)
And Jem, this is the first time in ages I've seen a good and natural 5/7/5 haiku.
There's nothing strained in the syntax, and the mid middle line hyphen works fine.
Impressive!
all my best,
Alan
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lovely image from 'pours' :)
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